"In our obscurity, in all this vastness, there us no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves."
We question ourselves, we torment ourselves and we put ourselves in situations where nothing can help us or lead us in the right path. Or more accurately the best path because in the end there is no right or wrong. As many say "Everything happens for a reason" therefore whether you choose the right path or the wrong one eventually you will end up where you belong. Even with that statement there are questioners, why should we live if we are only a fractions of a fraction of a fraction in the endless wonders of life. But making these conclusions put us in places where we guilt ourselves into truly believing and torturing where what is left of us is a war, inside. Here on Earth there is openly nobody here to help us, or more correctly, save us from a war, with no bloodshed, but tears, losses, and depression from not only us, but the people around us. If not one soul on this planet can save us than who can? There are no signs of life, no signs of hope or peace, just obscurity and ambiguity and battles within us. While we still question ourselves and torment, guilt and torture, we understand that no one can save us from ourselves but us. We are the answers to our problems. Although belief is within us we cannot use that to insure our futures because in the end we know that belief is only a pursuit towards happiness and cannot cause it.
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shy
3/30/2017 01:27:22 pm
i really like how you said that you will end up in the right path even if you make a right or wrong mistake
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Katelyn
3/30/2017 01:28:35 pm
As always sukhleen your writing talent is undescribable. You put how you feel not only into words but you put meaning into them. I really enjoy your point of view on this phrase and I hope to read more from you... Katelyn
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katelyn
3/30/2017 01:29:54 pm
*indescribable
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Malcom
3/30/2017 01:31:49 pm
I like how you phrased "you will end on the right path even if you make a right or wrong mistake."
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Martini zukini
3/30/2017 01:38:59 pm
Your writing is magical. You are truly a word wizard. You play with the words and they fit together like puzzles. Your sentences flow like waves, each one overlapping and connecting every single sentence. Great job.
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caleb
3/30/2017 01:50:36 pm
This was a magnificent piece of art that I truly relished and was very pleasant too the eye of the reader. Congratulations my fellow colleague!!
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malcolmisdope
6/7/2017 10:54:03 am
hello
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